Showing posts with label suspense. Show all posts
Showing posts with label suspense. Show all posts

Sunday, September 18, 2016

Dean and Mort's Gym - DBTC



    Dean set down the crystal tumbler with a heavy sigh. It was empty, but his throat still burned with the scotch. His room was dark, as was the rest of the gym, except for the single neon sign that glew red and yellow in his office window.
    Dean & Mort’s Gym” it read.
    Most days, he would chuckle when he read the sign. Not tonight though. Not with the man across the desk.
    Normally, if someone asked about the name, he might recant the tale of how he and his friend Mort were so desperate for a place to box, that they went out and opened a gym of their own. He’d tell them how people started to show up just to watch them train with each other. Family and friends at first, but soon they had to charge admission and were putting on little boxing matches of their own.
    Depending on who the person was, Dean might go into more detail for them. He’d tell them about how he was the heavier hitter but Mort was tougher. He could never stay on the mat no matter how many times Dean put him down. Every time he went down, Mort would jump right back up. Every time…except once.
    “That one time.” Dean would say. “That one time it was all my fault…” his voice would trail off quietly. Theatrically. “I saw the opening and I took the swing. I wasn’t really looking. Wasn’t thinking. I caught him square in the temple.”
    Most people stopped asking after that.
    A few brave souls might want to know more. They’d listen to his voice crack as he told them how he tried to get Mort back up. How he screamed for a doctor or an ambulance, but by the time the men in white had arrived, it was already too late. Then he’d go on about how he took off his gloves and hung them up that very night and how they still hang in his office today, soaked with the blood of his only true friend.
    No one ever wanted to know more after that.
    Not one except the man across the desk from Dean.
    “What would you tell them?” the man asked Dean. “Would you tell them the truth or more of the story that you’ve practiced so well?”
    “Would you tell them about the money on the fight? Or about the offer from the loan sharks? Would you tell them how you sold out your friend for the cost of a debt?”
    “No.” he said to the man. “I would tell them I made an awful mistake.”
    “Some would argue pre-meditation doesn’t allow mistakes, only regret.”
    Dean had no response.
    His eyes drifted to the sign in the window. The neon flicked and buzzed. A constant drone that Dean had long ignored but now sounded ten times louder than ever.
    “You’re right, of course. I thought it was the right thing to do.” Dean said. “The business wasn’t failing but it was built on a snake’s nest of bad investments and back alley deals. There was never enough money to pay back the sharks.”
    “It’s funny. When you think that you’re looking death in the eye, you do some crazy things.” Dean said with a hollow chuckle. There was no happiness in that sound. It was a low, deep thing that sounded more sinister and sad than truly amused.
    “Irony.” Dean said, shaking his head.
    “So tell me,” the man continued. “How would you make it right?”
    “The gym never belonged to me. Not me alone, anyway. That was my only real mistake. As you pointed out, plenty of regrets…but only one mistake. I should have been the one to take that punch.”
    Dean felt his guts twist into a knot as the man across the desk rose from his chair. He knew what was coming. He deserved it. He’d always had. Yet he didn’t have the stones to see it coming. Instead, he turned in his desk chair so that he could see his gloves hanging on the wall. They were ugly and old and still splotched with his friend’s blood.
    “Before you finish it.” Dean said quietly. “Just one more thing.”
    “And what’s that?”
    “Can you forgive me for what I did?”
    “No.”
    The police didn’t find Dean’s body until the next evening. A concerned regular had called in when he happened to look in the office window and saw Dean with his head caved in, slumped over in his chair. They cordoned off the area, checked for prints, and did what they could, but never found any evidence that pointed to the killer. After a few months of searching, they gave up.
    The building is still there though. The landlord has tried to sell it, but no one ever wants to buy. There always seems to be the smell of blood and the sound of blows landing whenever you’re in there late at night. No one dares stay another night.
    And so it sits. An empty old gym with a half burned-out red and yellow neon sign hanging in the window of a dumpy little office.
    Mort’s Gym” it still reads today.



(Hello Lovelies. I hope you enjoyed today's little flash fiction. I was challenged by my friend to try out a writing prompt that she herself was working on. "Write a ghost story 1000 words or less that involves a neon sign." It was a fun little experiment for me. Personally, I think it might have come out a little too dark and broody, but I'd love to hear your opinions!)

Saturday, September 17, 2016

Short Stories / Flash Fiction - Main Page


Short Stories / Flash Fiction
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Not all stories need to be 1000 pages long. Sometimes a few words is all you need
to make the skin crawl, the heart soar, and the mind run away in a world of words.
Take a moment to enjoy these short pieces who never felt they needed to have more
than a single chapter.
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Sunday, September 11, 2016

Late Night Research


    "I can't fuckin' do this anymore, mate."
    Julio's eyes burned and rubbing them only made them worse. No tears came to give relief. They were bone dry. He'd been staring at computer screens and dusty old tomes for more hours than he cared to count and he was losing what little focus he had left. The words were nothing more than a blur of squiggles.
    Closing his eyes, he hoped that not looking at anything would help. Instead he listened.
    Earlier, the library had been bustling. Despite the long standing stigma that one must be quiet in a library, there was only so much noise that you could suppress. It was nothing compared to how it was now.
    That is...empty.
    There was something to be said about knowing the right people. Had he been anyone, he would have been kicked out at closing time same as anyone else. Yet, trade hands and sometimes cash with the right people and you might find yourself with a few perks.
    Although, at the moment, it didn't much feel like a perk.
    "Goddamnit." he said again to the silence. "I'm done. Fuckin' done."
    Opening his eyes once again, he set about closing and stacking the dozen books spread out before him and saving the work he'd done on his computer. Every book was open to the same information, although it seemed to have slight variables based on what book it was from.
    Hoodoo.
    Up til now, he'd only heard the term traded by friends and colleagues. Men and women a lot more experienced in the paranormal than himself had talked about their run-ins with the black magic but never cared to go into details. Something about it seemed to make their skin crawl.
    He went to slam shut another dusty tome but found himself staring at the words.
    Goofer Dust. A powder, often brown-red or black in appearance, is a component of magickal spells made out of a variety of simple, natural ingredients. While there is a consensus among many that Goofer Dust can be comprised of any number of ingredients, the three basic elements that are most often agreed upon are rock salt, powdered sulphur, and graveyard dirt. Depending on its makeup, Goofer Dust is thought to have a wide range of magickal uses, but is most often utilized in malignant spellcraft.
     Julio shook his head and shut the book hard. The sound shattered the silence of the darkened library and echoed through the stacks. It was followed quickly by the remaining books that were quickly stacked and organized.
    Finally, with an exhausted sigh, he flicked off his desk light. He was instantly plunged into darkness as he extinguished the last bit of artificial light short of the "EXIT" sign that glowed green off in the distance.
    He'd have to keep researching in the morning. He'd heard reports of a witch sighted in the bogs just South of here. Of course, none of the locals actually believed that some woman was roaming the swamps dabbling in black magic, yet all of their "sightings" added up. Only a few deaths had been reported, all of them being contributed to gators and the sort. Julio would have to deal with her before anything big went down.
    It was only as he made his way towards the front door that he realized something was wrong.
    First, it was the soft crunch under his boot. It felt firm but giving. Definitely different than the hard wood floors of the library. Had someone spilled something?
    Reaching for the nearest desk, he quickly found the lamp and turned it on.
    Directly across his path, spread from one edge of the stacks to the other, was a heavy line of black and brown powder. It was deliberately poured and formed a clean barrier with the exception of his boot print. To his surprise, it seemed to extend in a line across all the stacks, working in a circle around him.
    BANG!
    Julio jumped at the sound. It had come from directly in front of him down the stacks where he would have been. Yet, nothing seemed out of place.
    BANG BANG!
    This time, it came from the stacks on either side of him. Was something hitting the shelves?
    "Don't break the circle."
    The voice was as clear as if they had been right next to him. Julio whirled instinctively to find nothing but empty desks and his lone desk lamp. He couldn't help but feel his heart start to race, his breath hitching up in his chest.
    BANG BANG!
   More hits. Farther apart again.
    It has to be the witch. Julio thought to himself as he reached under his jacket to draw the pistol he stowed there. He had no idea how she even knew that he was onto her yet, but he couldn't think of any other explanation. His eyes darted around the darkness, looking for any movement.
    BANG BANG!
    Julio jumped at the sound again, this time leveling off his weapon towards the stacks where the banging came from. He desperately wanted to squeeze a few rounds off, but didn't even know what he'd be shooting at.
    "Don't break the circle."
    He heard it again, but this time, he turned and fired wildly behind him in the direction of the voice. The gun boomed and roared but only managed to blow several holes in the stacks and knock books off the shelves.
    They hit the ground with a thud, scattering the strange line of powder in every direction.
    All at once, it seemed as if the sound drained from the library as Julio stared at the broken line. The bangs, the thuds of books, even the echoing roar of the gunshots slipped away as if in a vacuum. All that was left was the sound of Julio's breathing. And two words, almost whispered.
    "It's in."
    His heart pounded with utter ferocity as he yelped and turned towards the voice again. All he saw was the lamp on the desk. What he didn't see was what was under the desk, waiting for him to turn back around towards the exit. A thing with deep, black eyes, a slender, pale face, and long, sharp teeth that didn't like to cross a Goofer Dust line. At least...not an intact one.


(Hey all. So, this was SUPPOSED to be a quick little "Don't Break the Chain" post complaining about having to research stuff for writing. What came out was drastically different than I had originally intended. That said, I very well might make this a part of the hoodoo story I was already planning on working on...but we'll see. I hope you enjoyed!)